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terrymoon ([personal profile] terrymoon) wrote2011-06-20 12:30 am

[Sherlock BBC] Fanfiction - "I'll burn the heart out of you"


  • Title: I'll burn the heart out of you

  • Characters: Sherlock Holmes, John Watson

  • Rating: G

  • Word count: 100

  • Spoilers: The Great Game




His heart is racing. He never thought that John might be a victim as well - at least not now that the game was almost over.

So lost he was in the thrill of the game that it clouded his judgement, his rationality; that he forgot of the almost part.

He should have been able to see this coming, to even think of it as a possibility.

Now John is in front of him, wearing a jacket full of bombs. Sherlock is disgusted with himself, with his lack of reasoning.

His heart cannot stop racing and it might burst out.

[identity profile] phoenixgfawkes.livejournal.com 2011-06-20 03:52 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, escribiste fic de Sherlock, yay!

Y me gustó mucho cómo en pocas palabras describiste esa desesperación de Sherlock, cuando deja de tratarse de un juego intelectual y se vuelve todo horriblemente personal.

[identity profile] terry-evy-moon.livejournal.com 2011-06-20 02:56 pm (UTC)(link)
YAY!

Lo más importante, además de Sherlock, es que... ESCRIBÍ O.O

Estoy contenta con el resultado, y feliz de que te haya gustado :)

*twirls in happinesss*

[identity profile] justcyanide.livejournal.com 2011-06-20 02:38 pm (UTC)(link)
nalsnajkdbjkdbskdbsjdbadbad aww Sherlock

(si, soy bastante incapaz de dejar comments coherentes xD)

[identity profile] terry-evy-moon.livejournal.com 2011-06-20 02:57 pm (UTC)(link)
Pero... ¿te gustó? xD

¿Estás canalizando a alguien?

Gracias Kammie por leer y dejar comments incoherentes :)